Monday, February 28, 2005

monthsary... yes, it exists =)

"surrender"

once a soul with no direction
a shameful life and worldly motivation
unaware and ignorant of my actions
not knowing my life's destination



no peace living a selfish life
only darkness surrounds my sight
the life i find worth living
so dull, empty, and boring

where is the light i seek
a troubled soul is hard to keep
tired of living this kind of life
full of darkness and full of strife

worldly things kept me distracted
brought me low and left me wasted
empty handed and all alone
'twas the moment i found my home

this experience made me wonder
all i had to do was SURRENDER
a meaningful life after the pain
a wonderful sight after the rain



~~~*~~~

this is a poem i wrote inside the card i gave to my girlfriend on our 1st monthsary. we had a great time with our friends, celebrating our first month together. we had dinner at el cuento @ glorietta4, talked a while @ starbucks 7650 and gave her the card together with a wallet-size pic of us.

that's all for now... back to overtime work!!! *sigh*

6 comments:

Daxi said...

wow! galing! :) ur really r a poet! :)

heartcaptures said...

and all along i thought the poem was copied from a book! whoa! galing-galing!

Toni said...

That is so sweet. You do have the soul of a poet!

Anonymous said...

Nice... so sweet :)

Anonymous said...

The card now is with me and i appreciate my faith of doing such inspiring poem. anata tsugoi!!!!

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